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Where is my soul? Far away in the sky!


Elle est retrouvée.
Quoi? - L'Éternité.
C'est la mer allée
Avec le soleil.

Âme sentinelle,
Murmurons l'aveu
De la nuit si nulle
Et du jour en feu.

Des humains suffrages,
Des communs élans
Là tu te dégages
Et voles selon.

Puisque de vous seules,
Braises de satin,
Le Devoir s'exhale
Sans qu'on dise : enfin.

Là pas d'espérance,
Nul orietur.
Science avec patience,
Le supplice est sûr.

Elle est retrouvée.
Quoi ? - L'Éternité.
C'est la mer allée
Avec le soleil.


Arthur, Mai 1872

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Cool, from what I understand of ghazals, you've attempted very well :) (my understanding is limited though). However, I do know that each couplet is an independant poem. Anyway, I enjoy the imagery in this and especially the third couplet...there'...
November 18
This is really, really good Velen. A slave to his fists...is what I get from the last line and of course for me, it is a most brilliant summary of this poem, the way I read it. This reminds me of a very great movie...Well done!
November 18
A2Kdavis added a blog post
Deep-denim merges long, muffled shrieks and never ending film, that rumble through the gut. The churn and pebble - a reality becoming numb, when red-blackened puddles ripple, silver coated rings. Where stars are cradled as if they were newly born....
November 18
this is interesting.. hmm... that last line 'a king in denial becomes a slave' really causes me to contemplate..
November 15
this was an attempt at a ghazal
November 15
Ailill added a blog post
Light disguised in pursuit of visions of night, crimson sky rides into the trials of looming night. Storm clouds gathering together in mourning Outside shroud the breathless sighs of night. The wind blows in the scent of fresh linen Thunder echo...
November 15
Thnx Gonzodave for the comment and for the editing!! Yes it should be, *all of them*
November 15
Thanks so much for your comments Ailill!
November 14
Kylie Davis is now a member of Lipstick and Onions
November 14
Not only this piece - but the maturity in all of your pieces as well - make me stop and consider, "What have I been doing all these years?" :0) In the second line *All them fall down ...* should that include an All {of} them? And, maybe just [All...
November 14
I love the rolling motion of the words, the rhythm and the rhymes. They create a vivid picture in the mind, which is beautiful. Nice work.
November 13
Velen Revinem added a blog post
A monster, his eyes ablaze. Fire in his heart, tearing it away. Now is the time, he spits. Take pleasure with who we slay. Hacking at honor, Its all just a cough of blood now. Chilling thoughts, Piercing sick minds with a growl. Again and again ...
November 11
Well thank you very much, friend. :]
November 11
Very nice to read again Poet, and it's even better with the addition of your painting :)
November 10
Thank you my talented writing friend.Blessings.
November 10
Ailill added a blog post
Hanging, suspended in mid-air between here and elsewhere, The echo of the bell, swells with a sound that resounds. Resonating, it intones image shaped words, carved out of stone, gathering together, inside the ocean of mind. Invoking wis...
November 9
This is very good Velen...as per usual:) The one sailors fear of punishment stood out for me as well as the "knives" Well done!
November 8
Very nice Ailill. The imagery here is wonderful :) My fave is...Saucy aromas turn into tunnel musk. :)
November 8
Thank you both...always appreciated :)
November 8
Velen Revinem added a blog post
The ocean eats them one by one, their lungs replaced by salty waters, like knives in their throats. All them fall down, down, into liquid darkness. Never again seeing the light of day, never again sailing on their beloved, which sinks gracefully b...
November 8

Blog Posts

A2Kdavis

Point Of Origin

Deep-denim merges
long, muffled shrieks and
never ending film,
that rumble through the gut.
The churn and pebble -
a reality becoming numb,
when red-blackened puddles
ripple, silver coated rings.
Where stars are cradled as
if they were newly born.

Wonted little sods –
like startled tawny-bats
glaring ominously
through open searing cuts.
Their momentary wane -
before swooping for the exit,
hovering her dingy and
forever consoling cavern.

The place
where stale and fresh collide
and forbidden dwe… Continue

Posted by A2Kdavis on November 18, 2009 at 6:27pm

Ailill

Gathering Clouds

Light disguised in pursuit of visions of night,
crimson sky rides into the trials of looming night.

Storm clouds gathering together in mourning
Outside shroud the breathless sighs of night.

The wind blows in the scent of fresh linen
Thunder echoes inside the silence of night.

The thunder drums one beat, together in unison,
Calling, a summons to the presence of night.

In each flash of insight mind escapes into
the nearness of the inner landscapes of night.

This burgundy wine, blushing from a… Continue

Posted by Ailill on November 15, 2009 at 6:44pm — 2 Comments

Velen Revinem

[Now Is The Time.]

A monster, his eyes ablaze.
Fire in his heart, tearing it away.
Now is the time, he spits.
Take pleasure with who we slay.

Hacking at honor,
Its all just a cough of blood now.
Chilling thoughts,
Piercing sick minds with a growl.

Again and again are waves of hatred,
Consuming his soul,
Rewriting the roles.

Its only a matter of time, before he cracks.

His family, his home, all gone.
No more will he see the honor.
No more will he feel her love
Or the taste of a kiss....

He is now this.
This ro… Continue

Posted by Velen Revinem on November 11, 2009 at 4:00pm — 2 Comments

Ailill

Clang

Hanging,

suspended
in mid-air

between here
and elsewhere,

The echo
of the bell,

swells

with a sound
that resounds.

Resonating,

it intones
image shaped words,
carved out of stone,

gathering together,

inside
the ocean
of mind.

Invoking
wisps of
Smoke,

thoughts caught
in motion,

clouds of emotion
drifting by.

Posted by Ailill on November 9, 2009 at 5:30pm — 1 Comment

Velen Revinem

[Ocean's Peril]

The ocean eats them one by one, their lungs replaced by salty waters, like knives in their throats.
All of them fall down, down, into liquid darkness.
Never again seeing the light of day, never again sailing on their beloved, which sinks gracefully beside them.
News of the deaths of those aboard this legend is going to travel swiftly, like a gull in the warmest season.

One sailor is plagued by his past as he sinks, almost unconscious, barely hanging on to his thoughts, his breath.

He gulps for… Continue

Posted by Velen Revinem on November 8, 2009 at 1:30pm — 4 Comments

Edwina E du Casse.

Pouncer Of The Dark.


Art water colour by Edwina E du Casse.(c).2008.


Pouncer Of The Dark.
By Edwina E du Casse. (c) 8/11/09.

Your prey,
Is un-suspecting
As you stalk,
Crawl on all fours,
Belly close to the dirt,
Watching, waiting
Ever tense
On edge
Every muscle alert,
Waiting to devour,
Demolish
In shadows of dar… Continue

Posted by Edwina E du Casse. on November 7, 2009 at 6:30pm — 2 Comments

Ailill

Subway Jazz

Platonic dreams,
Phosphorescent themes,
Interwoven absurdities,

Illusion’s dissonance,
Lost innocence,

Ongoing conflict between
Hope and reality.

Alien nation,

Down in the
Subway station,

Underground.

Saucy aromas
Turn into
tunnel musk.

A lone
Saxophone
Seeks
lost souls.

Notes
passage of time
both
day and night.

Shades of blue,
A painted tune,
shimmers into
solitude.

Off-key
with the beat

of
tapping
feet.

Posted by Ailill on November 6, 2009 at 7:35pm — 1 Comment

A2Kdavis

Frequent Exchanges

Seamless
and momentous.
The eventful small passages,
turn and wave
on ever shifting tips.
Tidal whites peak -
to gingerly nudge
and swirl the silt
circling, gushing
the sandy laid rock.

Subtle
and unfinished.
Glimpses
to savour, pieces -
loosely sewn-in.
For never forgetting -
the final tailoring.
When all - will gather
and finally, unfold.


©A2Kdavis 2009.

Posted by A2Kdavis on November 5, 2009 at 11:00pm — 3 Comments

gonzodave

Aquarium




I stand and sing Aquarius
to the anxious crowd
all seated and looking at me.
"Harmony and understanding
Sympathy and trust
abounding.
No more falsehoods or
derisions.
Mystic crystal revelation
And the minds true liberation
Aquarius."

Yet all I see is myself forty years hence
in a pool glutted by gre… Continue

Posted by gonzodave on November 5, 2009 at 7:00pm — 2 Comments

Ailill

Pipes of Pan

The discordant drum beats
with a salient saxaphone scream.
A clock chimes nine minutes until 12.
Loneliness, a married mans dream,
and a single mans hell, delving
deep into the depths of self.

Consciousness, a praxis on the axis
of future, past and presence, in practice
with the process, clearing the skeletons
out of the closet with a musical deposit.

A Buddhist cowboy pursued
by the rudeness of solitude,
amusing the muse with a soulful tune.

No one here, just mere ghosts
imprisoned by a refl… Continue

Posted by Ailill on November 2, 2009 at 5:43pm — 1 Comment

 
 

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